The map below shows the development of the village between 2009 and 2014.

The given maps illustrate the changes taken place in a village from the years 2009 to 2014.

Overall

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, it is clear from the maps that it was a rural

area

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and was later converted into an urban

area

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by people over the years.

As a result

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, a lot of new constructions can be seen over the period.

Firstly

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, in the northeast

area

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, the farmland and the forest Park has completely destroyed and has converted into

sports

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a sports

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area

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with golf and

tennis

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a tennis

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court.

In addition

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, the hotel has introduced car parking facilities for their customers. These are the significant changes has occurred in

this

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direction from the years 2009 to 2014 .

Secondly

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, In the northwest,region the shops are turned into restaurants.

Likewise

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, the fish market is replaced by huge apartments.

Moreover

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, the sea in

north-south

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the north-south

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has

also

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gone through modifications.

However

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, there is

also

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a chance for new changes too.As humans are interested in developments.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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