You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •Say why he/she would not enjoy going college •Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her •Suggest the types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear MK, I hope

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letter finds you well, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I have received your letter and I think that you will be better off having a job rather than going to college. Let me clarify the situation for you, getting a job will be a good opportunity to have experience and make enough money which will help you to meet your needs and

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you can save some of it.

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, going to school needs a lot of attention to pass the exams and I believe you would not like it at all as it requires you to sacrifice your free time to study. Getting a job will help you to enjoy your spare time because you might work during weekdays only. There are many different types of work that would be a good match for you

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as a cashier, waitress or

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a customer

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service representative because you have good communication skills. please if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Best regards Iman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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182 words

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