You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •Say why he/she would not enjoy going college •Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her •Suggest the types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

#friend #advice #college #job #•say #•explain #idea #•suggest #jobs

Dear MK, I hope

this

letter finds you well, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I have received your letter and I think that you will be better off having a job rather than going to college. Let me clarify the situation for you, getting a job will be a good opportunity to have experience and make enough money which will help you to meet your needs and

also

you can save some of it.

However

, going to school needs a lot of attention to pass the exams and I believe you would not like it at all as it requires you to sacrifice your free time to study. Getting a job will help you to enjoy your spare time because you might work during weekdays only. There are many different types of work that would be a good match for you

such

as a cashier, waitress or

acustomer

Correct your spelling

a customer

customer

service representative because you have good communication skills. please if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you, Best regards Iman

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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