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In some parts of the world, traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. Why is this happening? What measures could be taken to ensure they do not disappear?

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It is undeniable that traditional
festivals
 and
celebrations
 in certain regions of the world have vanished.
This
 essay will elaborate causes of
this
 issue and propose solutions for preserving the
festivals
 and
celebrations
.
To begin
 with, numerous
festivals
 and
celebrations
 have been abandoned. Primarily
due to
 the shift of living cultures these days. The majority of
festivals
 and
celebrations
 were established based on nature, traditional ways of life, and occupations at that time.
However
, as various rural areas were transformed
to
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urbanized areas over time, those aforementioned are not valid anymore.
For example
, in Thailand, there was a festival in which villagers put a cat in a basket, walked around a village, and
then
 sang and prayed to the god for
raining
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 to support their agricultural livelihoods.
However
, in modern times,
this
 festival has totally disappeared as no one no longer associates rain with positive outcomes.
Instead
, rain is seen as an inconvenience which leads to wetness, sickness, and a traffic jam. In order to avoid the vanish of
festivals
 and
celebrations
, the government should support
this
.
Firstly
, the content regarding historic
festivals
 and
celebrations
 should be created and promoted through various forms of media, targeting the young generation so that they will conscious of how essential the
festivals
 and
celebrations
 are and try to participate
in
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.
Moreover
, the historic subject should be added to the school curriculum to ensure that the young generation learns about them and will able to continue the
festivals
 and
celebrations
 in the future,
then
 pass through the next generation. In conclusion, I firmly believe that
festivals
 and
celebrations
 should be protected from extinction, and
this
 can be achieved through an increase in awareness and education.
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