Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Physical activity is an important part of our life.
People
have various preferences for Use synonyms
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. Some of us are Use synonyms
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players. Others think that individual Use synonyms
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bring more benefits. In Use synonyms
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which are played in teams. It is not the primary factor, but I want to take into consideration that Use synonyms
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are more healthy for personal psychological status. It helps Use synonyms
people
to fill support and avoid feeling lonely. Use synonyms
For instance
, a basketball Linking Words
team
can be a real family. Use synonyms
According to
the interview in the “New York Times” every person on the Linking Words
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Chicago Bulls relate to Use synonyms
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players as to relatives. They invite each other to Birthdays, weddings, Use synonyms
even
Christmas parties. Plus to Correct word choice
and even
this
basketball players spent rather more time on training and Linking Words
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compare to family time. The pleasant atmosphere in the Wrong verb form
playing
team
allows one to feel full of energy and avoid depression.
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have their own benefits. In Use synonyms
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people
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Wonderful
example is Valentin Tailor. In his interview for “The Guardian” he shared how swimming changed his life. Regular training lets Add an article
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us grown
grown
up not only physically but mentally. Every competition proved Wrong verb form
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him
his own strength. In individual Change preposition
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you have many rivals, but the best one is yourself. Add a comma
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become stronger, Use synonyms
Correct word choice
and sport
sport
experience goes to their life experience.
Having considered both views, I think it is more beneficial to take part in individual Change the noun form
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sports
. My answer is univocal because I have never tried Use synonyms
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sports
, but definitely know Use synonyms
profits
of individual Correct article usage
the profits
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite