Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In the fast-pacing world, people have become more competitive. To

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in

this

race, they work hard for long

hours

which eventually reduces the

spare-time

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for their entertainment. Even though working for long

hours

has some disadvantages, it comes with more benefits. In the technologically advanced world, our needs have increased and so

the

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quality of life. To raise

financial

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status and

fulfill

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the

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necessities, people have to earn more money. Working after

hours

or moonlighting is one of the best

way

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to achieve

this

.

For example

, by working overtime in the primary

job

or finding a second

job

, they can get extra money

in addition

to their regular pay. Though, they have less time for

lessure

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leisure

activities they enjoy

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by fulfilling the needs of their family and their dependents. Other advantages of working extra

hours

are

job

satisfaction and

carrer

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career

growth.

Now a days

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, people are assigned with more load at

work places

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to

fulfill

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the client's requirements and increase the company's

reputition

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reputation

. Completing these additional works on-time by working extra

hours

provide satisfaction to the employees.

Otherwise

, they may feel unsatisfied which eventually

deteriorate

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the employee's

self-confident

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.

Also

, working hard with extra

efforts

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gain

good

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reputition

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reputation

for the employees which helps for their career growth.

For example

, when

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time for promotion, the

hard working

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employee who

own

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responsibility at work get more chance. In conclusion, working more

hours

by reducing

lessiure

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leisure

time, gain more advantages by improving quality of life, providing

job

satisfaction, and career growth.