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The percentages of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the most recent reasons for arrest

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The Pie and bar charts give information about the
number
 of individuals and the most common reasons for arrest from 1989 to 1994
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the
amount
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 of arrested
males
more
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is more
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 than
females
 rate, and public drinking is
a
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 most recent reason for
the
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both genders
Firstly
, the
number
 of arrested
men
 is more than the
number
 of
women
, which
are
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 32% and 9%, respectively. 91% of
women
 have not done any
types
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type
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 of
crimes
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crime
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,
while
males
 are 68%.
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 driving is the second
popular
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 reason among
the
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men
 which is approximately 26%,
while
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females’
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 percentage is about 14%. A lot of
males
 and
females
 have
arrested
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been arrested
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due to
the
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public drinking, which
are
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 approximately 31% and 37% respectively.
Moreover
, breach of order
also
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on
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one
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 of the reasons for arrest.
As a result
, about 18% of
men
 and 12% of
women
 have
arrested
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been arrested
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. Approximately 17% of
males
 and 19% of
females
 are in
the
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prison
due to
the
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assault. The
number
 of
men
 and
women
 who are in
the
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prison
due to
the
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theft
are
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 about 16% and 13%, respectively.
Furthermore
, there are prisoners who arrested
with
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 no reason, it is about 19% of
males
 and 18% of
females
.
Furthermore
, there
is
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 prisoners with unknown reasons which are about 5% of
males
 and 7%.
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