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In some countries owning a home rather than renting own is very important for people. What might be the cause? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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 about how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology forecasts the weather by congregating up-to-date data.
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,it is seen that the
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 mainly comes from a
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,radar collects
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 that comes from a
satellite
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.When the data is reached,it can be transferred in different ways one of which is through drifting a buoy.Before being shown on a special computer,the
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 goes through a radar screen and synoptic chart from radar and buoy respectively.
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 about the weather is shown on TV newsreader.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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