Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that million of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?
A gap
year
provides an opportunity to learn about the world
and earn money.One year
can be utilised in travelling across world
to learn what life is like outside of the education system.Add an article
the world
Also
,third-level education is expensive, and many students
can work in an entry-level job to earn and save before they start their studies.The average student in the U.K. need around 10000 pounds per annum to survive,and many students
drop out because they cannot afford to stay.
Despite these advantages,students
lose a year
that could have advanced their future careers,and they often get too accustomed to travelling or working that they probably will not return to a life of study.As corporate world
is so competitive that even a year
of experience will give other applicants an advantage in hiring.Moreover
some will take on an entry-level job and keep working in a job beneath their capabilities and not getting the same prospects that their future career might have.Add a comma
,Moreover
For example
,many gap year
students
work in the service industry which are easier jobs to get without a degree only to be stuck in them for the rest of their life.
In conclusion,taking a break from studies is advantageous if it allows students
to accumulate savings or learn about the world
.However
,they should be careful that it will not delay the start of their careers and lead to disillusionment with education.Submitted by sandhurajkaran94 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite