The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate the number of sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in five European countries, comprising the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. The figure
are
given in millions of Change the verb form
is
euros
.
Overall
, it can be seen that mostly the sale of coffee and bananas had increased over the period shown in the question and the biggest sales accounted for the UK.
Apparently, the amount of selling coffee in England had rose
almost 20 times which is a tremendous growth. Change the verb form
risen
In addition
, Switzerland had
grew 3 times with the figure being 6 million Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
in 2004, while
there were a minimal increase in Denmark and Sweden only 0.2 million of
Change preposition
apply
euros
.
Moving on to the bananas table, the highest revenue was occupied by the
England throughout the period, 1999 and 2004, with 15 Correct article usage
apply
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
and 47 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
respectively. On the contrary
, Belgium and Sweden were the two countries that
the money had declined.Correct word choice
where
Submitted by foamary41 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words euros with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!