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The diagrams illustrate the procedure and apparatus used in making
cement
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and how
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is utilised in the production of concrete for construction. The production of
cement
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is a linear process composed of 5 stages that begins with the mixing of raw materials and culminates with the packaging of
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.Making concrete is a simpler process that involves mixing four ingredients in a concrete mixer. Limestone and clay are crushed and the resulting powder is
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mixed before being passed through a rotating heater.Once heated
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mixture travels over a conveyor belt and is ground through a grinder.Now the
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has been produced it is packaged and transported to a construction site where it can be utilised in making concrete. Concrete is made of half gravel,quarter sand ,15%
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and 10% water.All these are added together in a cylindrical drum and rotated until
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is yielded.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual tours
  • digital technology
  • tactile experience
  • immersive experience
  • cultural hubs
  • educational experiences
  • digital representations
  • preservation of art and culture
  • economic benefits
  • social benefits
  • community engagement
  • accessibility
  • detail and scale
  • originals
  • viewing in person
  • tourism
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