The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps
illustrates
the changes in university sports courts between 1990 and recently.
Change the verb form
illustrate
Overall
, it apparent
from the maps that the facilities have been improved by the separation of indoor and outdoor Add a missing verb
is apparent
area
. Meanwhile, the university sports centreFix the agreement mistake
areas
toseems
Correct your spelling
seems
to seems
look
Fix the infinitive
to look
naturally
before with the Change the word
natural
park
there, rather than now because of the new facilities such
as basketball courts, fitness centre and indoor pool
.
The park
had been replaced with a basketball court so the sports courts had lost their green looks. South of the park
was a car park
and it had been demolished and become a tennis court now, then
this
facility moved into the indoor area
.
On the other hand
, the indoor area
did not exist before and now it builds then
contains several facilities such
as a café, indoor pool
, reception, changing room and fitness centre. The pool
was at
the outdoor Change preposition
in
area
and moved into the indoor area
. The fitness is built south of changing room which was moved into in
front of the indoor Change preposition
apply
pool
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, park, pool with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
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