The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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the changes in university sports courts between 1990 and recently.
Overall
, it
apparent
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is apparent
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from the maps that the facilities have been improved by the separation of indoor and outdoor
area
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areas
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. Meanwhile, the university sports centre
toseems
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seems
to seems
look
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naturally
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before with the
park
there, rather than now because of the new facilities
such
as basketball courts, fitness centre and indoor
pool
. The
park
had been replaced with a basketball court so the sports courts had lost their green looks. South of the
park
was a car
park
and it had been demolished and become a tennis court now,
then
this
facility moved into the indoor
area
.
On the other hand
, the indoor
area
did not exist before and now it builds
then
contains several facilities
such
as a café, indoor
pool
, reception, changing room and fitness centre. The
pool
was
at
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in
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the outdoor
area
and moved into the indoor
area
. The fitness is built south of changing room which was moved into
in
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apply
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front of the indoor
pool
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, park, pool with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.

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