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8. The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or any other academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Special skills and practice
knowledge
 are needed to reach a certain position,
such
 experience cannot be part of any theoretical educational institutes. I believe gaining
knowledge
 from practice experience is more useful than learning it from books. Getting a good position in the society is dream of everyone. Book
knowledge
 can offer guidance of foundation. Other hand practice
knowledge
 offered how to make buildings. Many businessmen are successful in their field by acquiring good field information. Special skills help a
person
 to stand out from others. Today, when getting a good job has become tuff
this
 type of skill puts a
person
 ahead in the competition.
In addition
, skills or
knowledge
 enhance a
person
's internal confidence. In comparison, any other
person
 skilled full
person
 can share his view about
practiclesolutions
Correct your spelling
practical solutions
 to any problem. A good example of
this
 is our ancestors they are not university graduates even though they know well about agriculture growth and production systems.
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