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Global warming Is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What problem does this cause? what can be done to deal with this situation?

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One of the most serious and dangerous things on our planet is Global warming . As
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a result, Global warming can cause
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 of the polar ice caps which will lead to high expectations of incensing in sea level and more extreme weather
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, the government must introduce laws to limit emissions from factories
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and invest in renewable energy from solar , wind or water power . Admittedly Melting of the polar ice cape will cause floods and unexpected
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 in the weather conditions,
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 will rise the water sea level and can demolish a whole city from the map . Global warming can cause a huge change in nature that will destroy the ozone layer and
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 become a big threat to human nature .
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, animals and plants will not live longer
due to
 global warming.
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 if our plates and trees die , we as human beings won't be able to breathe clean air again . One effective
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 that can lead
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 reducing global warming is to introduce strict laws to limit emissions from factories and reduce manufacturing
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 some counties to confine factories and manufacturing
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 limit country only .
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 government should support
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renewable energy from solar , wind or water power
such
 as , electric cars and machines that work with solar . In
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 Global warming can be reduced by us
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human
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 beings if we join together and support each other to reduce
this threats
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 on our planet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global warming
  • Climate change
  • Ecosystems
  • Biodiversity
  • Renewable energy
  • Carbon footprint
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Sustainable
  • Carbon sinks
  • Emission reductions
  • Reforestation
  • Adaptation
  • Mitigation
  • Fossil fuels
  • Conservation
  • Infrastructure
  • Pollution
  • Paris Agreement
  • Renewable resources
  • Energy efficiency
  • Heatwaves
  • Sea levels
  • Coastal habitats
  • Disaster response
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