The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of the exports reached a higher capacity than in the begining.

The line graph illustrates that the amount of coffee sent abroad from Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. A glance at the graph reveals that all of  the exports  reached a higher capacity  than in the begining.
The line graph illustrates the amount of coffee
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was
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exported from three different countries especially
in
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Brazil, Colombia, and Costa Rica between 2002 to 2012, over
the
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10 year
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period. A graph indicates that the exports have consistently grown in volume from the outset.
Overall
, all countries experienced an upward trend
in
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the end of the period. Another
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for the most significant growth was examination in
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Brazil
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In 2002, Costa Rica had the highest figure in exporting coffee at 15
million
.
Then
, it fluctuated over the period and reached 20
million
in 2012.
In contrast
, Brazil experienced a steady rise until
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a decline in 2008 at approximately 16%. After
leveling
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off at a low point, it saw a rise in 2012 and became the highest at 25
million
. One prominent feature of
this
date is Colombia had the smallest figure at 5
million
in 2002. There was
then
a surge until 2006
,
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when about 14
million
kilograms of coffee was exported from Colombia.
Thereafter
, the figure plunged until 2008 and
then
observed a dramatic increase in 2012, about 4
million
kilograms and 15
million
kilograms respectively.
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