The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The process illustrates the way in which
water
passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the
water
cycle. Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean
water
evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the
oceans
again. Beginning at the evaporation stage, it is clearly seen that 80% of
water
vapour in the air comes from the
oceans
. The heat from the sun causes
water
to evaporate, and
water
vapour condenses to form clouds. In the second stage, labelled ‘precipitation’ on the diagram,
water
falls as rain or snow. At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakes or return to the
oceans
via ‘surface runoff’.
Otherwise
, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the earth. Saltwater intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the
oceans
to complete the cycle.
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