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The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information on how many
times
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 per
year
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such
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 types of fast food as hamburgers, pizza and fried
chicken
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 were consumed by adolescents in Mauritius between 1985 and 2015.
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, the trend was not coherent for all the three kinds in question, for the popularity of pizza plummeted,
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 hamburgers and fried
chicken
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 both experienced a soar.
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, the growth rate for these
last
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 two groups of fast food was not the same. A closer look reveals that Italian junk food was at the peak of popularity among the Mauritian youngsters in 1985 being eaten 60
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 per
year
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,
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 facilities where burgers and fried
chicken
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 were served were visited just around 10
times
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 yearly. Since
then
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 fewer and fewer people opted for pizza,
thus
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this
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 group was steadily declining, being visited 10
times
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 a
year
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 fewer every 5 years and in 2015 it was visited only 10
times
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 a
year
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. At the same time, hamburgers and fried
chicken
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 started to surge,
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, if burgers enjoyed a constant growth of 10
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 per
year
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 every 5 years and
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 amounted to the record of 70
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 yearly, fried
chicken
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 gained its popularity exceptionally rapidly during the period of 1995-2005 and
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 stagnated until 2010, where it slightly increased and
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 achieved the result of roughly 62
times
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 per
year
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words times, year, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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