the charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014.
The given bar charts illustrate information about the six most popular
courses
by enrolments
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enrolment
on
the universities in the UK between 2007 and 2014.
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at
Overall
, all courses
had increased and the number of admissions in nursing course
showed the biggest change.
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courses
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the beginning, the law Change the preposition
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course
was the most popular choice among the all courses
approximatey
90,000 students enrolled. The second popular choice was psychology had 10,000 fewer than nursing Correct your spelling
approximately
course
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courses
Also
, pre-clinical medicine and design courses
showed same
amount of Change the article
the same
student
at around 70,000.
After seven years, there Fix the agreement mistake
students
were
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was
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a significantly
significantly
change. Change the word
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Firstly
, nursing course
students increased fourfold stood 24,000. The figure of
computer science rose from 50,000 to 75,000 Change preposition
for
at the end
of the period and it means 50
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a 50
more
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apply
increased
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increase
however
, it still
the least popular choice among Add a missing verb
is still
the
students.Correct article usage
apply
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