The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the information about attendance at various entertainment
venues
in 2009,
whereas
the table illustrates the information about prices at those
venues
shown in the chart in the same year. The values displayed in the chart are presented in thousands, and in the table, they are displayed in the United States dollar.
Overall
, cinemas were most popular in 2009;
hence
, they managed to attract a larger number of attendees.
However
,
ticket
prices for football games were highest for both single and family tickets. In 2009, the number of admissions in cinemas climbed to its highest value, nearly 1050 thousand.
However
, the other two
venues
, namely theme parks and sports, managed to occupy second and third positions, respectively. Nearly 350 thousand and 150 thousand attendees attended the theme parks and sports
venues
, respectively.
On the contrary
, the price of tickets for the event of a football game was at its maximum, about $73 for a
ticket
and $290 for a family
ticket
. The price of theme parks and other games
such
as basketball and cricket was lower than that of football games: nearly $70 for a single
ticket
, $210 for a family
ticket
, $30 for a single
ticket
and $115 for a family
ticket
, respectively. The price of cinema tickets was at its lowest in 2009, at $15 for a single
ticket
and $55 for a family
ticket
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words venues, ticket with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "displayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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