The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart depicts the information about attendance at various entertainment

venues

in 2009,

whereas

the table illustrates the information about prices at those

venues

shown in the chart in the same year. The values displayed in the chart are presented in thousands, and in the table, they are displayed in the United States dollar.

Overall

, cinemas were most popular in 2009;

hence

, they managed to attract a larger number of attendees.

However

ticket

prices for football games were highest for both single and family tickets. In 2009, the number of admissions in cinemas climbed to its highest value, nearly 1050 thousand.

However

, the other two

venues

, namely theme parks and sports, managed to occupy second and third positions, respectively. Nearly 350 thousand and 150 thousand attendees attended the theme parks and sports

venues

, respectively.

On the contrary

, the price of tickets for the event of a football game was at its maximum, about $73 for a

ticket

and $290 for a family

ticket

. The price of theme parks and other games

such

as basketball and cricket was lower than that of football games: nearly $70 for a single

ticket

, $210 for a family

ticket

, $30 for a single

ticket

and $115 for a family

ticket

, respectively. The price of cinema tickets was at its lowest in 2009, at $15 for a single

ticket

and $55 for a family

ticket

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4 paragraphs

229 words

7.50

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

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Clear and correct grammar

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