The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find

out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services in 2010. Summarize the

information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following bar charts demonstrate the outcomes of a university library's survey in order to examine the opinions of both full-time and part-time undergraduates about its IT support and opening hours in 2010. It can be easily observed that the majority of full-time
students
rated IT support as satisfactory,
while
their part-time counterparts found it less helpful.
However
, nearly almost of the audiences gave positive feedback about the
the
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regard to IT support,
whereas
the largest proportion of over half of full-time
students
considered themselves to be very happy with the service, only a fifth of those studying part-time was pleased.
On the contrary
, very negative feedback was given by a large proportion of part-time
students
, at 45%, which was nearly triple the figure for their full-time counterparts. The majority of the undergraduates described the current opening period as excellent, at 87% and 72%, respectively. There was only 1% of those studying full-time complaint about the service and a slightly higher figure of 5% of their part-time counterparts. The remaining of the examined 12% of full-time
students
was quite pleased with the library's opening hours, as opposed to nearly a quarter of those studying part-time, which amounted to 23%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "examine" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • university library
  • full-time students
  • part-time students
  • opinions
  • services
  • satisfaction
  • comparison
  • satisfaction levels
  • different library services
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