The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line chart illustrates the consumption of the three kinds of fast
food
by teenagers in Mauritius country from 1985 to 2015. The compared
food
are
Humburger
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hamburgers
,
pizza
and fried
chicken
.
According to
the data, kids are
pizza
about 60
times
through
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a year
in contrast
of
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to
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humburger
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hamburger
hamburgers
and fried
chicken
in 1985. Through years the fast
food
pizza
was
declining
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a declining
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trend until it reached about 10
times
in 2015.
In contrast
, hamburgers had
sharp
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increase from 10
times
to 70
times
which were the most eaten fast
food
over
years
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the years
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.
In
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Indeed
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deed
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fried
chicken
was
in
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at
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same
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the same
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level of
increasing
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increase
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of
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as
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humburger
then
remained stable
since
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from
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2005 to 2015
a
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apply
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round
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around
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60
times
. In 1985 fried
chicken
was the less favourite
to
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of
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kids around 5
times
a year but through
years
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the years
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it rosé slightly until it reached 65
times
. In 2000 the three fast
food
were almost at
same
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the same
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range of favourite about 40
times
a year.
However
the
most
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favourite for kids was eating
humburger
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hamburger
hamburgers
the
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came
fried
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with fried
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chicken
while
pizza
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the pizza
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was the
last
food
children will look
to
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at
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it
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apply
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, humburger, pizza, chicken, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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