The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line chart illustrates the consumption of the three kinds of fast food
by teenagers in Mauritius country from 1985 to 2015. The compared food
are Humburger
, Correct your spelling
hamburgers
pizza
and fried chicken
.
According to
the data, kids are pizza
about 60 times
through
a year Change preposition
apply
in contrast
of
Change preposition
to
humburger
and fried Correct your spelling
hamburger
hamburgers
chicken
in 1985. Through years the fast food
pizza
was declining
trend until it reached about 10 Correct article usage
a declining
times
in 2015. In contrast
, hamburgers had sharp
increase from 10 Add an article
a sharp
times
to 70 times
which were the most eaten fast food
over years
. Correct article usage
the years
In
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Indeed
deed
fried Add a comma
,deed
chicken
was in
Change preposition
at
same
level of Change the article
the same
increasing
Replace the word
increase
of
Change preposition
as
humburger
then
remained stable since
2005 to 2015 Change preposition
from
a
Correct article usage
apply
round
60 Correct your spelling
around
times
.
In 1985 fried chicken
was the less favourite to
kids around 5 Change preposition
of
times
a year but through years
it rosé slightly until it reached 65 Correct article usage
the years
times
. In 2000 the three fast food
were almost at same
range of favourite about 40 Add an article
the same
times
a year. However
the most
favourite for kids was eating Correct quantifier usage
apply
humburger
Correct your spelling
hamburger
hamburgers
the
came Correct article usage
apply
fried
Change preposition
with fried
chicken
while
pizza
was the Add an article
the pizza
last
food
children will look to
Change preposition
at
it
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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