: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below displays the
price
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of per kilogram
bananas
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in four particular countries over the period from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Japan was the country that sells
bananas
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most expensive from the first to
last
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time in the survey. In comparison, the
price
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of
bananas
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in the USA fluctuated gently in half of the survey and remain after that 5 years. In 1994, the
value
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of
bananas
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in Japan reached approximately 2
dollars
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, in the next year, the
price
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increased dramatically to around 3
dollars
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per kilogram. In 1996, the
value
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fell back to 2
dollars
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and peaked at 2.50
dollars
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in 2004 when the
last
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year of the survey. In France the
value
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of
bananas
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remains for four years, dipping sharply to a low of 1.50
dollars
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in 2000 and 1.00
dollars
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in 2003.
However
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, the
price
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in 2004 peaked at more than 1.50
dollars
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. By 1994, the
value
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of
bananas
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was approximately 1.50
dollars
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compared with under 1.00
dollars
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in the United States.
Moreover
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, the
value
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started to decrease and fluctuated after that 10 years and reached higher than the USA, with the
price
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between 1.50 and 1.00
dollars
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bananas, value, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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