task 1 :You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

task 1 :You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line chart below displays the
price
of per kilogram
bananas
in four particular countries over the period from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Japan was the country that sells
bananas
most expensive from the first to
last
time in the survey. In comparison, the
price
of
bananas
in the USA fluctuated gently in half of the survey and remain after that 5 years. In 1994, the
value
of
bananas
in Japan reached approximately 2
dollars
, in the next year, the
price
increased dramatically to around 3
dollars
per kilogram. In 1996, the
value
fell back to 2
dollars
and peaked at 2.50
dollars
in 2004 when the
last
year of the survey. In France the
value
of
bananas
remains for four years, dipping sharply to a low of 1.50
dollars
in 2000 and 1.00
dollars
in 2003.
However
, the
price
in 2004 peaked at more than 1.50
dollars
. By 1994, the
value
of
bananas
was approximately 1.50
dollars
compared with under 1.00
dollars
in the United States.
Moreover
, the
value
started to decrease and fluctuated after that 10 years and reached higher than the USA, with the
price
between 1.50 and 1.00
dollars
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bananas, value, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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