A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sera, I hope you're doing well. I,m delighted to hear from you about
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wonderful news regarding the outing. Actually, you have planned to do it in your first summer as what we did in our summer holiday. I would say it is a great decision because we
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enjoyed a lot during our summer vacation.
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, I would tell you about the place which we have visited. The camping site is located East part of Australia and it is very close to a nice river.
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, we were able to enjoy some adventure activities
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as riding boats and ratting.
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to that, there is a famous mountain, if you are interested in hiking you can go for that
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.
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, I would like to say that, you should bring some more food because it is difficult to find out a coffee shop or cafe.
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, please bring adequate blankets and mosquito repellent to take care of yourself and your family. Especially, you will be needed a rechargeable lamp because there was no power supply during the night. I wish it will be an enjoyable holiday for you.
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, I would like to join you on
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outing but ,unfortunately, I have stuck with my office works. Love K. Lal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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