A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sachin, First of all, I am surprised to hear that you have planned to go on a weeklong camping holiday with your college friends. Since you have not been on any
such
Adventures tour before,
this
outing would be extremely enjoyable for you. I am sure you will definitely explore the natural beauties of different locations
while
moving from one place to another. There are plenty of mesmerizing natural views that you will be able to observe during your travel. The memory we will have from
this
visit will remain forever with you.
However
, you need to take a few precautionary steps before heading towards your journey. There is a disadvantage to going for an outing during
this
time. Since the rainy season is approaching, your expedition might get affected by the heavy rain. So please bring a raincoat with you so that slight rainfall would not make any disturbance in your tour.
However
, it is advisable to stay in a safe place during the heavy rainfall.
Besides
, once you return from your trip, we can make another camp in future. I would love to go on adventurous camping with you. Hope you will enjoy your time during your outing. I will catch up with you after your return. your friend. Kabir Hamal
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