The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps give information about a plan to develop an industrial site in Norbiton into some refreshments in the future.
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,the idea is to redevelop an urban area with some residential houses and public facilities. Currently, the area is dominated by factories along the
road
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. There are two
shaps
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of the
road
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. The first one is a roundabout in the middle of the map with three plants around them. After that, there is a straight
road
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on the east with five factories building on
the
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both sides. A river
seperated
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separated
separates
the farmland and the town,
while
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there is no bridge at all.
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, there is
plan
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a plan
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about to happen, the local council authorized a huge project, which will turn the factories into
residencial
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residential
buildings
as well as
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new buildings will be constructed.
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, there will be a new roundabout
in
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the south
road
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.
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, there will
also
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have
a new shops
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a new shop
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, which residents here can have
a
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better convenience for buying groceries,
besides
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the shopping
center
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centre
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,
ther
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there
is a new medical
center
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centre
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, which will benefit the
local
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locals
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more.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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