The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph conveys the consumption of three types of fast food purchased by teenagers from 1985 until 2015 in Mauritius City. Generally, the consumed products are hamburgers,
pizza
and fried chicken.
Overall
, it is seen that burger consumption was popular among fast foods
while
consuming
pizza
has become less popular over the
years
. In 1985 about
ten
burgers were eaten per year by youth.
Then
, the number gradually increased by
ten
every
five
years
, reaching its peak at 70 in 2015. Nearly the same trend is observed for fried chickens. The scale started at nearly
five
,
then
steadily went up by
ten
each
five
years
period, reaching its peak of 60 in 2005. From 2005 and the preceding
five
years
numbers remained unchanged and slightly went up in 2010, reaching its largest number slightly higher than 60. Regarding the popularity of
pizza
, the scale started at the highest point compared to other takeaways. Afterwards, the amount went down significantly fast. In 2015, teenagers'
pizza
interest reached its lowest point of
ten
pizzas eaten per year. In general, the line graph illustrates how fast teens' interest in
pizza
faced a downward trend,
whereas
the number of eaten hamburgers continued to increase.
On the other hand
, consumption of fried chicken steadily rose.
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