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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

#people #claims #waste #homes #governments #requirement
There is an ever-increasing usage of
plastics
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bags
 for storing purposes and to carry something.It is often argued that
recycled
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recycling
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 the waste from homes is not sufficient.So,The Government should take certain measures to surged up the recycling of waste and should make a legal requirement.
This
 essay argues that it
enough
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recycling
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to recycle
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the
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waste from homes. The usage of paper
bags
instead
 of plastic
bags
reduce
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reduces
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the
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almost
of
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half of the pollution in
atmosphere
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.
Moreover
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 if people use the same bag for other purposes and use
multiple
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it multiple
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 times decline the wastage.It is
therefore
argeed
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agreed
argued
that is
 enough to recycling the dust which are collected from houses.Cloth
bags
 are
primary
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 example ,Where
indivduals
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individuals
 use
number
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a number
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 of times to store
the
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something
as well as
 to carry things.
Nevertheless
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 it helps to save
the
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money
from
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not to buy plastic covers.
However
,many disagree and feel that the only method to increase the recycling rate is That the Government should keep certain laws. To improve
rate
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 of recycling The Administration
involve
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 in
this
. Because, They believe that more pollution is present on the land, It does not decrease by means of just recycling the dust which comes from houses, and
this
 essay will disagree
this
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,
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if humans follow
the
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environmental
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environmentally
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 friendly products,No need to make any rules or restrictions. In conclusion,Recycled the dust from homes to control the pollution.
Partculary
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Particularly
 the products which
is
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are
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 not made of plastic.and it enough rather than the keeping the conditions.
However
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 as long as we carefully
usage
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use
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 the products do not need
of
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apply
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any actions.
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