Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
There is an ever-increasing usage of
plastics
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plastic
bags
for storing purposes and to carry something.It is often argued that recycled
the waste from homes is not sufficient.So,The Government should take certain measures to surged up the recycling of waste and should make a legal requirement.Change the form of the verb
recycling
This
essay argues that it enough
Add a missing verb
is enough
recycling
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to recycle
the
waste from homes.
The usage of paper Correct article usage
apply
bags
instead
of plastic bags
reduce
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reduces
the
almost Correct article usage
apply
of
half of the pollution in Change preposition
apply
atmosphere
.Add an article
the atmosphere
Moreover
if people use the same bag for other purposes and use Add a comma
,Moreover
multiple
times decline the wastage.It is Correct pronoun usage
it multiple
therefore
argeed
Correct your spelling
agreed
argued
that is
enough to recycling the dust which are collected from houses.Cloth bags
are primary
example ,Where Add an article
a primary
indivduals
use Correct your spelling
individuals
number
of times to store Change the article
a number
the number
the
something Correct article usage
apply
as well as
to carry things.Nevertheless
it helps to save Add a comma
,Nevertheless
the
money Correct article usage
apply
from
not to buy plastic covers.
Change preposition
apply
However
,many disagree and feel that the only method to increase the recycling rate is That the Government should keep certain laws. To improve rate
of recycling The AdministrationAdd an article
the rate
involve
in Change the verb form
involves
this
. Because, They believe that more pollution is present on the land, It does not decrease by means of just recycling the dust which comes from houses, and this
essay will disagree this
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with this
,
if humans follow Remove the comma
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
environmental
friendly products,No need to make any rules or restrictions.
In conclusion,Recycled the dust from homes to control the pollution.Change the adjective
environmentally
Partculary
the products which Correct your spelling
Particularly
is
not made of plastic.and it enough rather than the keeping the conditions.Change the verb form
are
However
as long as we carefully Add a comma
,However
usage
the products do not need Replace the word
use
of
any actions.Change preposition
apply
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