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Write about the following topic. As Earth runs out of natural resources, we have started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth. To what extent do you agree with them? What alternatives might there be to exploiting space for natural resources? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Evidently that nowadays we already have a lack of various fossil
fuels
.
As a result
, some individuals argued that we need to start findings
of
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new natural
resources
 somewhere in space.
Nevertheless
, other people reckon that we need to find resolutions for
this
 problem on Earth
instead
 of discovering and finding space. Looking from my perspective I agree with both opinions. So in
this
essay
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 I will
further
 examine
this
 thought-provoking question. On the one hand, today we should be concerned about a lack of all natural
resources
 and of
course
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 we need to try to solve
this
 problem.
To begin
 with,
firstly
, we need to
try
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 refuse all products which are made of some of
particular
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 endangered
resources
.
For instance
, oil. We can stop using
patrol
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 for cars and replace our patrol cars with electricity.
Secondly
, we can recycle ,
for example
, plastic things like bottles, cups, packets and so on.
On the other hand
, starting to mine different
resources
on
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 our universe
it
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is a great idea. The first and easiest way is to start to explode meteorites and in debris try to find fossil
fuels
.
Moreover
, nations can bring together and create special teams which will mine natural
resources
 on planets.
For instance
 on Mars.
However
, all these explorations and findings of fossil
fuels
 need a tremendous amount of money.
Additionally
,
to transport
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 all these
resources
 will be problematic too. In conclusion,
firstly
 we need to reduce the usage of all fossil
fuels
 on our planet.
Secondly
, we need to recycle already used
iteams
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items
.
Furthermore
, we can try to launch organisations ions and companies which will try to mine all fossils on other planets
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