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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The effectiveness of studying in co-education is becoming increasingly controversial. Some Folks tank that boys and girls should be educated separately.
While
 other
believes
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 that they get more benefits
by
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 combined
study
.
This
 essay will discuss
both
 views in depth and will provide evidence as to why
study
 Atco educational school is superior. Let's look at those individuals who think that
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 education to boys and girls in separate
schools
 is better. Because at
the
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 single-sex
school
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 he or she is free to learn anything or to choose any subject to
study
. As an example, if I talk about my college, at there
both
 genders were studying together. I found difficulty in attending lectures
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 biology in front of boys. In sum, In
mixed gender
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classes
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 pupils found themselves bound in choosing subjects. In spite of
this
, to be with those individuals who believe that attending mixed
schools
 brings more benefits for
both
 genders. Because they can learn two communicate with
different
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 gender.
In addition
, they can learn those skills which
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 more in
opposite
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 sex. In a social experiment conducted at the University of California, it was concluded that those kids who
study
 with
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 sex have more skills and their communication power is very strong.
Due to
 these reasons, mixed
schools
 have proven more advantageous for
both
 sexes. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed
both
 views in detail in which, some people think
opposite
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 sex should be educated separately.
While
 the rest of them believe to enroll kids and mixed
schools
 In order to get more advantages. In my opinion, learning with
opposite
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 gender brings challenges which help to improve communication and develop more useful skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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