The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate how many
electricity
units are produced using fuel in
Australia
and
France
in 1980 and 2000
also
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
electricity
units in
France
doubled in 2000
according to
1980
while
it raised in
Australia
by 70%. The main source of
electricity
in
Australia
in both studied years was coal whilst it was nuclear power in
France
. In more detail, in 1980 the basic resource to produce
electricity
in
Australia
was coal which presented the half of others. The next one was
hydropower
and natural
gas
with an equal proportion of fifth.
Last
but not least was
oil
with 10%.
Furthermore
, the situation was different after twenty years as the whole creation increased from 100 to 170. The base resource was still coal with 130 rations and
hydropower
came next with 36, and
finally
oil
and
gas
with the same ratio which was 2. In
France
in the first year, it took 25 coal and 25
gas
with 20
oil
and 15 nuclear
while
the
hydropower
was 5 to produce 90 electric units. The state differed in 2000 as the creation was multiplied to 180 ones using 126 nuclear power and 25 of both
oil
and coal with 2 of both
hydropower
and
gas
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, australia, france, hydropower, gas, oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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