The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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The tables compare the turnover of Fairtrade

coffee

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and bananas in two separate years in the

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, Switzerland, Demark, Belgium and

Sweden

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Overall

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while

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the amount of money gained from selling those goods mostly increased, the figure for bananas in Belgium and

Sweden

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decreased.

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, the

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earned more money in both

coffee

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and bananas than any other country. In 1999, the sales of

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in Switzerland were 3

million

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euros

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, followed by Denmark and

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at 1.8 and 1.5

million

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euros

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respectively.

Sweden

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earned the lowest money from selling

this

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commodity, with 0.8

million

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euros

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. After five years, the

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dominated the sales figure for

coffee

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at 20

million

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euros

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the other data climbed by about 0.2 to 3

million

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euros

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only. Regarding banana turnover, the

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always ranked top recording 15

million

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euros

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in 1999 which rose threefold after five years. Switzerland and Denmark exhibited a marked upturn in their sales, to 5.5 and 4

million

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euros

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In contrast

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, the figure for Belgium and

Sweden

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fell slightly to around 1

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euros

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Fairtrade sales
significant growth
trends and patterns
market expansion
sustainable consumption
ethical products
consumer awareness
economic impact
percentage increase
market share
profit margins
trade initiatives
consumer behavior
retail figures
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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Some people think that it would be better for larger companies and industy to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvanteges of giving children this massege?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statments?

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?