Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some countries prefer to build
sports
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complexes
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with specialised
facilities
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for top athletes, in order to increase the probability of winning various kinds of
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competitions. In my opinion, it is a positive way, in order to be one of the best countries in terms of
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.
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, having the same
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could motivate regular
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to do sport more regularly, too.
Due to
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this
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reason, I concur that everyone should have access to them. First and foremost, I concur that top athletes that make their country well-known need special places because they dedicate their lives to
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, unlike other
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.
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, I would like to mention that those
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complexes
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cost a lot of money. And if the government built more than there are right now, that country's budget will lose millions. The money that they would be able to spend on something better
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as improvement of technology, medicine, education and etc.
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means that those
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are not only unnecessary for regular
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but
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expensive for the government.
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, there is a chance that if
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had
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complexes
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in their hometown, they would be much more encouraged to do sport,
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the rate of obese
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would be less, too.
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,
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would have fewer health issues
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as diabetes and so on.
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, in my point of view because of its advantages everyone should use those
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. And in order not to exceed the budget, the countries could use the money for military for those
facilities
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialised facilities
  • train top athletes
  • international sports
  • boost
  • reputation
  • attract
  • sporting events
  • access
  • general public
  • inequality
  • opportunities
  • overemphasis
  • elite sports
  • neglect
  • grassroots development
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