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Some people believe that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people argue that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some
people
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 think that
climate
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change
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 could have a negative impact on
business
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.
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, other
people
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 believe that
climate
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change
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 could create more
business
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 opportunities. In my opinion,
climate
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change
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 could make more
business
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 chances for the following reason. Regarding the negative effect of
climate
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change
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 in terms of
business
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, some
companies
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 manufacture
products
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 that are deeply related to
climate
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change
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,
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 as plastic bags or straws.
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, a survey which was conducted by Tokyo University shows that 70% of plastic product
companies
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 closed some of their factories between 2000 and 2015, which cause their service to become drawback and lost their benefits.
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climate
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change
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 leads some
companies
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 to tremendous damage, I think
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 modification was mandatory to live on our earth for a long time in the future.
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, the advantages of
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change
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,
people
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 said that it could create more
business
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 opportunities. Most of many countries agree with improving
climate
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change
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 and they struggling to reduce CO2 to reduce the average temperature. The situation makes
people
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 think about what movement is kind to our earth and
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 encourages
companies
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 to produce more eco-friendly items.
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, on cosmetic websites, they usually put the eco-friendly mark on some
products
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 because
people
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 tend to buy these
products
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due to
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 higher interest rates to
climate
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change
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 ever before.
People
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 want to buy more nature-friendly
products
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 so that
companies
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’
business
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 widens. I believe that thinking about our environment on earth brings us benefits to both
business
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 and
people
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.
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, some
people
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 believe that
climate
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change
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 could create more
business
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 opportunities and I agree with
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 view
although
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 other
people
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 think that
climate
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change
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 could have a negative impact on
business
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.
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