It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music , and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals are born with a

talent

for something

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others achieve the same purpose through hard

work

. Some people say that only talented children can be at the top at certain things like

sport

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sports

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or music,

while

others claim that

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hard workers

too can excel at the same task. In

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essay

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will discuss both these opinions. On one hand , we have a group of people who believe that children who have

natural

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talent

for sports and music can achieve excellence in

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choosen

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chosen

field.

Talent

hunt is done in schools and sports

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at

early

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stages of a child. During

this

process , a teacher can identify a

child

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exceptional skills in

sport

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or music.

Then

through proper practice that child can become good at that thing. The problem with

talent

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kids is that they are overconfident knowing that they are good at their game.

Therefore

they do not put too much effort into polishing their skills and after a

while

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it can become frustrating for them

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not

getting

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better.

While

,

on the other hand

, there is a group of society who thinks that hard

work

can beat

talent

. Science has proven that if any sport or musical instrument is given 10000 hours

then

anyone can be a master of

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their game. Most of the champions in the world got to the top

due to

their hard

work

. Rafael Nadal started practising

for

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tennis

from

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the age of 6, Yanni,

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worlds

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most famous pianist started playing

piano

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the piano

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at the age of 6.

Similarly

, these hard workers achieve more in practical life too because they know nothing can be achieved without hard

work

. In the culmination of the above essay, it can safely be said that

talent

alone is not enough. You have to put on sweat and tears to become good at something.

Therefore

, in my opinion, hard workers can surpass talented individuals.