It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music , and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals are born with a
talent
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where
others achieve the same purpose through hard Correct word choice
whereas
work
. Some people say that only talented children can be at the top at certain things like Use synonyms
sport
or music, Fix the agreement mistake
sports
while
others claim that Linking Words
hardworkers
too can excel at the same task. In Correct your spelling
hard workers
this
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will discuss both these opinions.
On one hand , we have a group of people who believe that children who have Correct your spelling
it
natural
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a natural
talent
for sports and music can achieve excellence in Use synonyms
the
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their
choosen
field. Correct your spelling
chosen
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hunt is done in schools and sports Use synonyms
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at Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
early
stages of a child. During Correct article usage
the early
this
process , a teacher can identify a Linking Words
child
exceptional skills in Change noun form
child's
sport
or music. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
Then
through proper practice that child can become good at that thing. The problem with Linking Words
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talent
kids is that they are overconfident knowing that they are good at their game. Replace the word
talented
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they do not put too much effort into polishing their skills and after a Linking Words
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it can become frustrating for them Correct pronoun usage
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for
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getting
better.
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on the other hand
, there is a group of society who thinks that hard Linking Words
work
can beat Use synonyms
talent
. Science has proven that if any sport or musical instrument is given 10000 hours Use synonyms
then
anyone can be a master of Linking Words
in
their game. Most of the champions in the world got to the top Change preposition
apply
due to
their hard Linking Words
work
. Rafael Nadal started practising Use synonyms
for
tennis Change preposition
apply
from
the age of 6, Yanni, Change preposition
at
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the worlds
worlds
most famous pianist started playing Change noun form
world's
piano
at the age of 6. Change the article
the piano
Similarly
, these hard workers achieve more in practical life too because they know nothing can be achieved without hard Linking Words
work
.
In the culmination of the above essay, it can safely be said that Use synonyms
talent
alone is not enough. You have to put on sweat and tears to become good at something. Use synonyms
Therefore
, in my opinion, hard workers can surpass talented individuals.Linking Words
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