Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Write to your friend about this place. In your letter explain where the place was and how you got there describe what you saw offer to take your friend there

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Dear Gagan, Hope you and your family are well. We have not met yet after our studies and I am planning to do a nice get-together. You know what!
Last
weekend I visit a new place and its name is 'Narmata'. My friend told me about that and it mesmerized me as it was very fascinating. So, I want you to must visit that attractive area.
Moreover
, It was a very quiet and peaceful location and it was on the top of the mountains.
Thus
, it shows a great view of the whole city. Actually, that area is near Penticton City and there were two lakes on opposite sides of it. It looks so beautiful especially, in the evenings. I really want to visit that adorable attraction with me. Let me know when are you free. I will pick you up. Hope that news makes you excited. Please back to me. With love, Kiran
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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