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Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to him to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter:  Apologize  Explain the situation  Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket

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Dear Sam, How are you? We have not
catch
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 up so
long
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a long
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time
. I remembered
last
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the last
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time
 we were together in
Ranvir
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 marriage. I felt excited I got
letter
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 in which you wrote that you got two tickets for Salman
Khan
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 new movie. But when I looked
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 date of
movie
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the movie
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 I became so sad.
Frstly
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Firstly
, I am feeling so sad to
imform
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inform
 you that I have my job interview on
same
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 day and
time
.
Certaniely
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Certainly
, I was waiting and
perparing
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preparing
 for
this
 interview for so long
time
. And
finally
, I got the chance
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 I could not miss it.
Although
, I felt blessed that you still aware
about
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 my favourite actor
Eventhough
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Even though
 I
busy
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 on that day,
but
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I
confered
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conferred
 with our common friend Ashu. She is free on
22nd
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 and she is willing to go with you. I remembered you both have
really
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 good bond with each other. She told me that she will contact
with
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you soon.
Anywhy
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Anyway
, I am really sorry that I messed up your plan.
However
, we can make another plan soon. Yours Lovely, Tania
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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