The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart compares six categories of American people’s
habit
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habits
on
having meals outside from 2003 to 2013. It is Change preposition
of
cleared
to see that Replace the word
clear
the
individuals tended to Correct article usage
apply
eating
fast food once a Change the verb form
eat
week
or once or twice a month in the decade.
In 2013, just over 15 per cent of individuals chose to go to fast food Use synonyms
restaurant
several Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
times
a Use synonyms
week
, which was half as much as “once a Use synonyms
week
” and “one or twice a month” groups(32% and 30% respectively). In 2006, there was a Use synonyms
slightly
growth Change the adverb
slight
by
5 per cent of people who Change preposition
of
consuming
several Change the form of the verb
consumed
times
a Use synonyms
week
Use synonyms
while
once a Linking Words
week
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reaching
its peak by a Wrong verb form
reached
thid
and once or twice a month group falling to the lowest point to a quarter. 2013 experienced a Correct your spelling
third
considerate
rise Replace the word
considerable
on
once or twice a month, which accounted Change preposition
of
by
33 %. Change preposition
for
On the other hand
, once a Linking Words
week
and several Use synonyms
times
a Use synonyms
week
showed a downtrend Use synonyms
by
Change preposition
of
appoximately
5 Correct your spelling
approximately
percent
.
As for the other three categories, residents in America who never Change the spelling
per cent
having
fast food or Wrong verb form
had
eating
everyday made up only less than 5% and a few Wrong verb form
eat
times
a year group Use synonyms
was
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apply
constitued
13% in 2003 , Correct your spelling
constituted
then
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climed
to 15 % and stabilized in 2016.Correct your spelling
climbed
claimed
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words week, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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