The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart compares six categories of American people’s
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having meals outside from 2003 to 2013. It is
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individuals tended to
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fast food once a
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or once or twice a month in the decade. In 2013, just over 15 per cent of individuals chose to go to fast food
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several
times
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, which was half as much as “once a
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” and “one or twice a month” groups(32% and 30% respectively). In 2006, there was a
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growth
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5 per cent of people who
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several
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a
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its peak by a
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third
and once or twice a month group falling to the lowest point to a quarter. 2013 experienced a
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rise
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once or twice a month, which accounted
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33 %.
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approximately
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. As for the other three categories, residents in America who never
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fast food or
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everyday made up only less than 5% and a few
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constitued
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constituted
13% in 2003 ,
then
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climbed
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to 15 % and stabilized in 2016.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words week, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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