The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map illustrates the comparison of
museum
plans between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, several facilities were established during the 10-year period for serving visitors.
To begin
with, the most noticeable change is that the temporary
exhibition
room
was expanded, and relocated to the west of the
museum
,
while
the shop, and changing
room
which were moved from the southeast of the
museum
were replaced by the original temporary
exhibition
room
at the southwest of
museum
.
Then
, a restaurant was opened above the temporary
exhibition
room
.
Furthermore
, it can be seen from the diagram that cafe was shrunk to one-half of its original size, and
then
the toilet which used to be located at the southeast of the
museum
was built at another half of the old cafe.
Moreover
, in the garden, fountains were established at the south of the garden,
whereas
at the northwest of the garden, the cafe sitting area was constructed.
Lastly
, both tickets entrance and exit, and the permanent
exhibition
rooms next to the main hall remained.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, exhibition, room with synonyms.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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