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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others velieve they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country #velieve
It is argued that skilled workers should work for their own
country
 they
practiced
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, rather than
employed
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 in a foreign
country
, for their desires. In
this
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 I would discuss both these views and I believe that they should work for their own nation. Professionals like doctors and engineers need to be educated and
practiced
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 for years and
government
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 spend
huge
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 amount of money on that, particularly if the education is free.
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the
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to statistics, around 12 years of allocating funds
on
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such
 person is done by the taxes of
general
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 public.
Therefore
, those people at least need to serve the
country
 for
certain
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 amount of years. It is unacceptable that
such
 people
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 to another
country
 for personal desires.
This
 would cause
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 drain in the community.
On the other hand
, if skilled people are not paid enough and do not have
satistory
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satisfactory
 facilities, they would
definetly
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definitely
 move
into
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 another
country
.
This
 happens because they sacrifice time and money for their targets and prefer to achieve a better lifestyle after
employement
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employment
. I believe that professionals should serve the
country
 if they are enjoying
the
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free education as it is vital that
tax payers
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taxpayers
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 must be
benifited
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benefited
benefitted
by
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their
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 money spent on them. The
country
 will face
shortage
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 of workers and
this
 may lead to
economical
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 issues. Another fact is that
this
 will cause to lose some other person's chance to have free education. He or she might
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actually want to serve the
country
 other than going after their personal benefits.
To conclude
, I think that professionals should work for their own community where they were freely educated rather than serving
for
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another nation for
own
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their own
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 attributes.
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