The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line graph presents the
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of foreign travellers in three distinct regions in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
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, the figure of overseas guests on the coast has taken the lead most of the time, only to be surpassed by the amount that visits to the lakes for a short
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. The statistic of people who opts to move to the mountains slightly grew over time and ended up as the lowest among the 3. From 1987 to 1997, the total of guests to the coast hovered between 40 and 50
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families, whilst the lakes’ visitors witnesses a moderate rose from 10 to 40
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travellers, followed by a dramatically soared from 40 to approximately 75
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guests for the next 5 years. Between 1997 and 2007, the
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of community who considers the lakes as their destination peaked at 75
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people and significantly plummeted to 50
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visitors by the time of 2007, meanwhile the
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of visitors to the coast steadily expanded and culminated at nearly 80
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crowds. From 1987 to 2007, the
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of travellers in the mountains gradually climbed, experiencing a minimally increasing from 20 to almost 40
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folks.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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