Some people think that children under 18 yrs old should receive full time education. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education

is the basic government policy that

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to build a strong nation, so they

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to create a better generation in the future. Some people believe that

children

should stay in class until the age of 18 years old. I

also

believe that all

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children

should

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to get proper

education

, but it will highly depend on the

children

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as their needs will likely

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. First of all, as for the benefit of

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education

, it will provide the

children

with knowledge and critical thinking to help them

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with a well-made curriculum from the experts. They will

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with

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people

on

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the

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similar age and will socialize with their peers. As the

children

not always

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knows

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what they want to do in the future, the experience with their friends will help them to find a suitable role for their future. The

school

system will help them to learn the basic knowledge, so after they graduated, they will be ready to put into the real world as a fully functional adult. But,

although

it may sound idealistic,

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in reality it's not always as good as it

sound

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. The

school

system somehow lacks in many aspects

in

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children

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development.

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, the

school

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teach the

children

to socialize with

wider

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community outside their

school

system. They will only focus on their studies, and forget that after they graduated, the real world is way more scarier than their

school

environment. Some

children

may face a culture shock after they graduated.

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, the

children

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condition is not similar. They are growing at a different family and

community

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, so

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needs will

also

different

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. Not all

children

needs

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the same basic

education

in class, some of them may already

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their passions, so they need to focus on them.

For

example

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children

who

wants

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to be an athlete, a musician, a painter, or else. In my conclusion,

full time

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education

until the age of 18 years old is not necessary for all

children

. In most

cases

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it will help the

children

to get basic

education

and prepare them to fully function in society. But

for

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several cases, some

children

who already figure out what they want to do in their life, will

needs

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another

education

to support their dreams.