You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

Dear Sir/ Madam , I am
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wiriting
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to bring to your attention
I
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had
issue
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at the hotel , when we arrived
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hotel we have lots of luggage we were in
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and the staff do not do anything at all just
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watched
us
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, took a long time to provide us our room number
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I discussed with
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to tell her the
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and solved it as quickly as she could . I was amazed
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sloved
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she has
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to convince. Based on his
situation
I would like to suggest
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a perfect team
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hotel than now I am hoping that
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never happens again. Yours sincerely, Ruqayah,
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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