Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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.

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, whether the government should advocate

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or not. in

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my opinion. A popular belief is that

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supporting and protecting

art

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culture

has been considered as an essential thing for human activities

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as

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art

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.

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plenty of options rather than using or utilizing the

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, because individuals can follow the modern era to use cutting-edge

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as paramount elements to get

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high quality of

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product

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and

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environment at work. Even though directing

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of

culture

has difficulties and failures to manage, organize, or utilize, technology has a huge opportunity to obtain a better result.

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, if citizens focus on

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growth to attract

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productivity, they will earn more

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and

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.

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, focusing on

prosper

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the artists could incline the amount of good-quality

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not only for today but

also

for

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days.

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, there are several issues or problems,

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art

and

culture

to become crucial and famous in society’s view by having high cost and

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government budget. First thing

first,

having terrible

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art

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culture

research could obtain and increase

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of development, because several inhabitants have

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and hope about the easiness of financing.

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budget could

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negative impacts or consequences, because society will not agree, and advocate

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on infrastructure.

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supporting

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an ideal opportunity to become potential

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,

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supporting and

protecting

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could not be implementative and acceptable, because spending

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goverment

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government

budget can make the country poor.

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, if several societies understand and comprehend

regarding

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the

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infrastructure

impact, they will appreciate the meaning of development economy to avoid feeling unemployment in

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.

Therefore

, infrastructures have been assumed as paramount elements for

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to know and admit the

technology

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opportunity

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in

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some years ago until today’s era. In conclusion, in my opinion, I agree

to protect

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support

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art

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culture

, because it can make more

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and

incomes

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from the local artists.