Some people say that the best way to improve public health is ny increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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are
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number
of Change the article
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the number
people
who believe that the best way to develop people
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people's
health
is by adding more sports
facilities, while
others say that it would have some effect on Add an article
a person
person
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person's
health
and other measures are given. Personally, I would say that increasing sports
facilities everywhere will give motivation
to work out.
Nowadays, most Change the article
the motivation
of
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the
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people
are choosing a
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by
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for
hours
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People
working at that type of work are tend
to obesity. Because you will sit Change the verb form
tend
at
the same chair from day to day, and you can not lose your physical energy there. Change preposition
in
That is
why more and more people
are becoming to
overweight. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, plenty of teenagers are playing videogames
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video games
instead
of walking out of him or her
house and in their Correct pronoun usage
their
live
there is no time for doing exercise. But if Replace the word
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government
will set up Add an article
the government
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the machine
a machine
machine
for training all Fix the agreement mistake
machines
people
will see them and in their leisure time they will go out and do little
exercise.
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a little
On the other hand
, some people
think that it may have bad
effect Correct article usage
a bad
for
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on
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a person
person
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person's
health
and they require to find other
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another
way
for promoting Fix the agreement mistake
ways
sports
. In my point of view, country
should have free entrance for extra Add an article
the country
a country
sports
lesson
and maybe Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
then
parents will sign up their children to
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for
sports
. Moreover
, children will have motivation
to train even if they will be adults. But I think that children can take their parents as a role model and they will repeat Change the article
the motivation
parent’s
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their parent’s
routine
. So, Fix the agreement mistake
routines
that is
why we should start from
ourselves and by doing Change preposition
with
exercises
we will be Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
more
healthier than our older generation.
In conclusion, I would say that sport is the main thing that Change the word
apply
people
should keep and only by working out we can be healthier and live longer than others. That is
why it is the bay way to increase public health
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