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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their studies?

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Recently, there has been a heated debate in the community about whether school leavers should go straight to
university
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 or take a
gap
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 year to travel or work for a
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. In my opinion, both views have advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, working or travelling for a period of time
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 of going to
university
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 directly can make those people more familiar with the working and living environment after graduation, and know the difficulties and hardships of making money, which can make them more enthusiastic about studying after entering
university
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. And
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 can
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 take a
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 year to engage in some high-tech jobs so that they can know where their knowledge is lacking, so they can focus on learning the knowledge they are not good at after entering
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.
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,
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 do not go to college directly but go to work or travel for a period of time, which will increase their time away from campus.
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 will cause them a lot of trouble as they cannot adapt to campus life after they enter the
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 campus. They cannot focus on their studies and life, which may prevent them from passing exams or graduating. And bad habits developed during previous
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 years may make their studies difficult during college. In general, taking a
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 year
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 of going directly to college is
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 an option for
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.
Students
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 need to weigh the pros and cons and make a decision that they will not regret.
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