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Many people today prefer to socialise online rather than spend time with friends in the local community. To what extent do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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In recent days, there has been a heated discussion in society about whether
people
 are more comfortable making
friends
 online than in person. Some
people
 think that making
friends
 online is better,
while
 others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, there are more benefits to making
friends
 online than staying with real-life
friends
. On the one hand, making
friends
 on the Internet allows you to meet
friends
 from all over the world. They can teach you about the culture and customs of different places, and even when you make
friends
 from other countries, you can learn their languages. In
this
 way,
people
 can gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons.
In addition
, if you don't get
together with
 real
friends
, you can reduce your social
time
 and reduce your money output, so making
friends
 is more efficient and saves costs.
On the other hand
,
people
 would rather spend
time
 on the Internet meeting new
people
 than spend
time
 with real
friends
 to develop bonds.
This
 way,
people
 have fewer opportunities for face-to-face communication. Online chatting mostly involves typing or voice chatting, which does not require many communication skills in real life.
As a result
, communication skills may decline.
Additionally
, if you do not often meet and socialize with real
friends
, you may neglect your relationship with them, and the bond between you may not be as strong as it could be. In general, I support
people
 spending more
time
 on the Internet to meet new
people
, so that the benefits outweigh the risks.
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