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n many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is argued that the government must take some action regarding young people who are facing obesity and
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 problem. From my point of view, I disagree with the notion as of the government should take measures related to the bigger issues.
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 essay will outline the reasons why
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 issue should not be handled by the related authority.
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, there is no public policy that makes
children
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 overweight and unhealthy.Contrarily, these conditions are most likely
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 unhealthy lifestyles
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 as eating candies that contain much sugar and
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 foods did not have good nutrients. The role of the
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 is very important to make sure that every kind of food that their
children
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 consumed is healthy.
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, a related authority
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 as the
health
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 ministry should have some guidance for the
parents
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 that have these problems with their
children
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 so they can implement it. Moving on to the
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there is a misconception in society that the heavier a kid the healthier they become. Many
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 think that a fat kid is a happy and healthy kid. They did not realise if the
children
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 are overweight, they will have a higher risk of many
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 problems in the future
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 as diabetes and heart attack. The latest research shows that the percentage of
children
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 who are having
health
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 problems increased significantly. So,
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 kind of mindset must be corrected as it is only harmful to their kids. To summarise, I believe that overweight and unhealthy issues on
children
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 should not become the responsibility of the government.
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, the
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' intervention is needed to make sure they provide healthy food for their
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.
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, the authority has to guide the
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 on how to prevent and fix
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 kind of matter.
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