Public health is becoming an urgent issue nowadays. Some argue that government should create nutrition and food choice laws to improve public health, while others believe that it is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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it is sometimes thought that the

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with regard to nutrition and food choices ought to be enforced by governments in order to deal with the increasing public

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problems, other

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believe that it is a personal issue which should be responded to by individuals themselves. In my opinion, I consider that

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's

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is their own responsibility and they should be the

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who care for it. On the one hand, some

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contend that the

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crises would be handled effectively if the

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are implemented.

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, governments can restrict the proportion of sugars allowed in beverages

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as soft drinks.

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could be the first step to keeping low-nutritious foods away from

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or even banning them from the market.

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, unlike personal choices which can be done merely on a limited scale, enforcing the

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can tackle the issue on a larger scope.

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, it will, spontaneously, lessen the

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consumption of unhealthy diets at a national level.

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, it is often believed that

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's behaviour is a major problem and I agree. It is undeniable that even when governments and food companies join

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forces, final decisions still lie upon each individual. Lifestyle changes,

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, would be a sustainable solution for

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ongoing

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crisis.

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, the modification is more practical compared to the food

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since only a little effort is required to make it successful. In conclusion,

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may vary in their opinions, I think that the country stands a better chance to overcome its public

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issue if every individual is willing to aid and adjust their food-consuming habit.