These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In our current times, a significant augmentation of
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is taking place leaving their
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to work
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taking care of the children.
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why
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occurring
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changes in our lifestyle and how it is a positive indicator of our development.
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fathers are more frequent throughout the years and it is a repercussion of our current lifestyle.
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equality and the repartition of roles following it.
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equality is one of the main reasons for
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phenomenon. Where the husband,
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of commanding and leaving house care to his wife, opts for a more comprehensive approach.
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means both parents take responsibility
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their duties and choose their roles based on their merit and abilities. In that case, it explains the rise of
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, which could be done by the decreasing number of housewives.
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, in 2020 in Glasgow, a
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adopted
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way of life and now feels more relieved, feeling great
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the role they both have chosen. Since
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their whole neighborhood has adopted
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way of life. These occurrences are positive as they enhance the life of millions of households, by giving a chance to each
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, to do what they want. The positive effect of
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“abnormality” is clear, it brings couples to a new level of comprehension without any restriction
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encourages the flourishment of each of the parent's capacities and
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without holding back.
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, a
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has been known in their
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for being in a toxic relationship in 2022, but since 2024, they found out, with the help of friends from Glasgow, that
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doesn't matter in a
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roles. Now, the
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lives happily together, with the father taking care of the children and home, and the mother going out working. In conclusion, these repeating cases are an indicator of happiness and evolution for households.
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positive impact can only be explained by the increasing amount of people gaining
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of how superficial and wrong patriarchy was.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breadwinner
  • caregiving
  • paternal leave
  • societal perceptions
  • gender roles
  • flexible working conditions
  • personal preference
  • father-child relationship
  • emotional and social development
  • household responsibilities
  • career opportunities
  • professional achievements
  • balanced parenting
  • earning potential
  • social stigma
  • societal pressure
  • discrimination
  • traditional mindsets
  • resentment
  • adjustment
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