The Most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Improving

human’s

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lives

is the main aim of

science

. In my opinion, I totally agree with that statement. Through all the past decades, if you read history you would find that most of the scientists were so keen to make useful inventions to make people’s

lives

easier. The primary reason for that, making an invention that may contribute to civilization will lead to glory for its creator. Each scientist dreams to highlight his/her name in the history book by a great scientific discovery or a revolutionary invention.

For Example

, Till now we know that the scientist who invented the electric lamp is Edison because we

use

this

invention nearly every minute in our daily life. What should we

use

science

for if not to make our

lives

easier? Of course, nothing

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important than that. Each scientific

discover

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contributes to our comfort. Could you imagine our life if Edison did not discover the lamp, or if the electricity itself was not invented, or the cars , the planes, the rockets or even the recycling of garbage haven't been discovered yet

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Nevertheless

that

science

is a tool used for making our

lives

easier, we cannot deny that some

use

science

for their own benefits, neglecting its impacts on others.

To sum up

Science

is a tool that God gave us to

use

for our benefit. Despite the huge civilization and inventions that we have nowadays, we only have a small amount of knowledge and

science

while

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for God.

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