The Most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Improving
human’s
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lives
is the main aim of
science
. In my opinion, I totally agree with that statement. Through all the past decades, if you read history you would find that most of the scientists were so keen to make useful inventions to make people’s
lives
easier. The primary reason for that, making an invention that may contribute to civilization will lead to glory for its creator. Each scientist dreams to highlight his/her name in the history book by a great scientific discovery or a revolutionary invention.
For Example
, Till now we know that the scientist who invented the electric lamp is Edison because we
use
this
invention nearly every minute in our daily life. What should we
use
science
for if not to make our
lives
easier? Of course, nothing
more
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important than that. Each scientific
discover
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contributes to our comfort. Could you imagine our life if Edison did not discover the lamp, or if the electricity itself was not invented, or the cars , the planes, the rockets or even the recycling of garbage haven't been discovered yet
.
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Nevertheless
that
science
is a tool used for making our
lives
easier, we cannot deny that some
use
science
for their own benefits, neglecting its impacts on others.
To sum up
,
Science
is a tool that God gave us to
use
for our benefit. Despite the huge civilization and inventions that we have nowadays, we only have a small amount of knowledge and
science
,
while
the most
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for God.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • enhancing
  • quality of human life
  • advancements
  • medicine
  • healthcare
  • scientific research
  • solving societal problems
  • improving living standards
  • global issues
  • climate change
  • food scarcity
  • technological advancements
  • limitations
  • negative consequences
  • ethical considerations
  • sustainability
  • environmental preservation
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