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We live in a world of technology these days. The internet brings with it clear advantages and disadvantages. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

#world #technology #internet
Technology is ruling over everyone's heart and mind these days.
Internet
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 has brought a revolution in
one
's lifestyle be it personal or professional. Certainly,
this
 development has its own merits and demerits. The same shall be envisioned in
this
 essay
along with
 my opinion in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
presence
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 of hi-tech devices which operate through data connections has made
world
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 no less than a global village. With a click of a mouse,
one
 can see what's happening in different parts of the world. In fact,
digitilization
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digitisation
 has narrowed distances and enhanced connectivity on
personal
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a personal
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 level as well.
For instance
,
few
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 years back before the device revolution, it was a herculean task to talk to
one
's family abroad.
However
, today's scenario has been flipped and interaction over video calls and chats gives a very
clo-knit
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close-knit
 experience.
Secondly
,
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 of
internet
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the internet
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 has led to the comprehensive growth of an individual. Search engines like
google
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Google
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 and
yahoo
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Yahoo
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has
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 broadened
one
's scope of thinking by enhancing intellectual skills. To elucidate,
smallest
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the smallest
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 of the tasks can now be forecasted through the web like
whether
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forecast, job openings and navigation.
Such
 applications have made everyone's life
a
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smooth sail and comfortable. To explain
further
, back in
1990s
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the 1990s
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 when newspapers and radio channels were major media available, people had to travel
places
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 for search of
job
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jobs
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.
In contrast
, today
one
 can think of exponential growth by
utisling
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utilising
such
softwares
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software
 wisely. On the flip side, overcrowding and
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expoitation
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exploitation
 of branches of
internet
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the internet
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 like social media
has
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 made a man sort of slave. Youngsters, these days cannot imagine their life without gadgets. It has detrimental effects on
one
's mental
as well as
physcial
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physical
 health.
According to
 a report, people who have more screen time are more prone to serious
illness
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illnesses
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 like melancholy, depression, anxiety, autism etc. To get deeper, too much presence of laptops and social connections have made people
to
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live a life which they can display as being extravagant. In the notion of
show-off
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a show-off
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, they are losing real bonds and meaningful relationships. To
consumate
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consummate
, to polish
one
's personality, it's
indispensible
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indispensable
 to upgrade
one
's and make use of
latest
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 technology.
However
, limited use of
such
 resources by equally being mindful of
one
's values can bring
the
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positive outcomes.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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